Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students should be encouraged to question and offer criticisms of their teachers. Others think this will lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

One of the debatable concepts of today's world is educational quality . A bunch of personages claim that they should be giving their student's the

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to ask the question and offer criticisms is a just argument , howbeit there are some who express disagreement with it and buttress that the teachers if they do it they will

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their respect and discipline .

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both stances before presenting my opinion . On one hand , the crusaders of the question and criticisms in class express their support on valid grounds .

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, the simplest exposition is development . To be more specific , these days they see considerable development in all areas of life , so they must pay attention to

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, Ali is a teacher. He is a really like to

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of the normal way .

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, they are trying to make a nice step for their

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any level of study . Reasoning from the other side , partisans of the

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relaxing more than others because they

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the same actions every day .

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changed drastically in

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of persons . Reem is a teacher from

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generation , so she did not like

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to reach the top without any

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from their students . To summarize the composition , the essay explicated

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both views . Regarding

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benefits

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outweigh it is drawbacks .

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