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Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It has been a controversial topic when it comes to whether
people
 are losing the ability of
face to
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face
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communication
communicaiton
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communication
 because they are using smartphones and
computers
 all the time. In my opinion, due to the frequency of using smartphones
are
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getting higher, the skill of
communicate
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communicating
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 with real
people
are
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 affected.
First
 and foremost, it is obvious to see that
advance
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 technology
reduce
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 the opportunity to talk with each other
face
 to
face
. To be more specific, you can rely on a cell phone to deal with everything in daily life.
Instead
 of going out to shop or eat, now you can order whatever you want and they will be delivered to your house by using the applications on the phone.
Consequently
, there are much less interpersonal
communications
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communication
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 in daily life
such
 as asking
people
 for help between
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strangers
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stranges
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strangers
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, friends or even between families. As time passes,
people
 are accustomed to using
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their phone
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phone
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phones
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 to type words and lose the skill of interpersonal
communication
. Admittedly, it is more efficient to talk to
people
 via cell phones and
computers
. You can talk to someone wherever you want as long as you get the internet.
However
,
the
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communication
 via
the
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phones and
computers
are
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 so flat that
people
 gradually lose their
ablities
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abilities
 to
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comprehend
comprehand
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comprehend
 the emotions and body
languages
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 of others, which is very uncommon to see in the past eras without these digital devices.
Moreover
, the sincere atmosphere of
face to
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face
communication
 can narrow the gap between
people
 and take the conversation to a higher level, which
is
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online
communication
 cannot reach. In conclusion, I believe the increasing
people
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number of people
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 using cell phones and
computers
 to communicate is a reason why
people
 losing their
skill
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skills
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of
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in
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 interpersonal
communication
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • interpersonal skills
  • overreliance
  • digital communication platforms
  • convenience
  • efficiency
  • social bonds
  • enhance
  • bridging long distances
  • fostering connections
  • age groups
  • adept
  • integrating
  • landscape
  • emotional intelligence
  • nuances
  • striking a balance
  • limitations
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