You have just read an article in an inernational travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter - Correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, The purpose of writing

this

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letter is to inform you

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regarding

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mistake in the article published

last

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month

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magazine’’ page no. 23 Oldest university. The latest edition of your travel magazine included an article

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about

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Cambridge university

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the oldest in the world and it was

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established

establised

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established

in 1209. But the fact is Oxford is the oldest

english

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speaking university which was founded in 1096. A magazine

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as yours has a good reputation

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among

amoung

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the international tourist and individuals alike. It is very important that the fact and information should be checked prior to

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publication. I feel that

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at least

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at least

in the

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publication the article is to be republished and make

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apology note and provide

correction

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with factual information before sending for

final

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print. Yours faithfully, Hiren

Dhanwani

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Dhawan

Submitted by hirendhanwani on Sat Jul 02 2022

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IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

136 words

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