You have just read an article in an inernational travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter - Correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, The purpose of writing
this
letter is to inform you
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regarding
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mistake in the article published
last
month
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magazine’’ page no. 23 Oldest university. The latest edition of your travel magazine included an article
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Cambridge university
is
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the oldest in the world and it was
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established
establised
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established
in 1209. But the fact is Oxford is the oldest
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speaking university which was founded in 1096. A magazine
such
as yours has a good reputation
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among
amoung
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the international tourist and individuals alike. It is very important that the fact and information should be checked prior to
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publication. I feel that
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at least
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in the
next
publication the article is to be republished and make
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apology note and provide
correction
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with factual information before sending for
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print. Yours faithfully, Hiren
Dhanwani
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Dhawan
.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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