Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am Sandra Adams, living on West main street near Central Park. I saw

this

advertisement on a Facebook Group called "Now Hiring in the city". I am really pleased to hear

this

advertised and I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I am interested in your offer. Once, I was a housekeeper at Hilston Hotel in Branson, Missouri since I was 25 years old and Now I am 31 years old. I quit that job because I have to move to

this

town for following my husband who is working at Bank Of America.

Thus

, I personally think I have opportunities doing

this

job and I will be available 5 days a week from 9:00 AM - 12:00 PM and 15:00 PM - 18:00 PM on Monday, Wednesday, Friday, Saturday and Sunday I look forward to hear from you and I hope you let me do

this

job Yours faithfully, Sandra Adams

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7 paragraphs

159 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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