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Some people think that there are things individuals can do to prevent global climate change. Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Global warming or other problems in
this
 field concern all
people
. Some
people
 believe that conservation of environmental
change
 is an individual duty for all citizens. While the majority of the
people
 believe that
this
 crucial problem has to solve just by the government. I think, officials and authorities have the main responsibility but are more aware of climate
change
 affecting the public. In
this
 essay, I will mention both views
then
 explain a point of my view and
then
 conclude. Nowadays, because of some reasons, we face various problems in the environmental field, from air pollution to lack of water and global warming. So, it seems the government and other related organisations have the duty to find ways to solve
this
 issue and protect the environment. They can give more awareness of useful tips to the public. In fact, they specify more budget for education and increasing knowledge among
people
.
Also
, the authorities must set strict laws on
this
 issue. Exact observation can help to prevent criminal and
then
, considering suitable penalties for the guilty, especially, some punishments that have benefits for natural resources
such
 as tree planting.
On the other hand
, having enough knowledge about related issues, as well as exact use of them has significant effects on the world. Another important thing is, that children can learn and do beneficial activities, in fact,
next
-generation without spending a lot of costs behalf the government can have enough knowledge about conservation of environment. In conclusion, I completely believe that governments have the main responsibility for climate
change
 and
this
 is a global problem all countries have to help together to find a practical way to solve
this
 subject. Of course, ordinary
people
also
 can help to reduce the speed of
this
change
.
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