increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast-food. it is necessary for Government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree with it?

Nowadays, the number of people has medical issues getting higher than before. The big reason is
the
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junk
food
consuming
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. One of the
solution
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is increasing
food
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tax
. There are several
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that
government
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considered
these
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policy
.
Firstly
, the higher
tax
of
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fast
food
will
applied
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of cost
to get
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a meal
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meal
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.
Then
people
changes
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their habit to make their own
food
foor
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for
daily.
Secondly
, the
company
will
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their
constumer
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consumer
consumers
because the
food
price is
expensive
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than used to be. The
government
have to
has
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many
option
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the
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kinds of
tax
policy
.
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.
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Lastly
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, the
uneumployee
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unemployed
employee
number will affect the
tax
policy
. The
fast
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food
has many employees
then
the more taxes paid
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with many
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will reduce the profit. The
company
will
chose
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cut off
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for efficiency. For that
condition
, the
government
should
has
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detail
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condition
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despite
of
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the material production
also
implication the
company
for the number of unemployees.
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should
taking
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more understanding before taking the
fast
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fast-food
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food
regulation. To conclude that the
food
tax
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especially
especilly
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especially
for fast
food
its
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great
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policy
to
creating
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the
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healthier society. The several
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that should
be notice
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for
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Government
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the Government
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help to better
outcome
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both
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public and fast
food
companies.
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