increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast-food. it is necessary for Government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree with it?

Nowadays, the number of people has medical issues getting higher than before. The big reason is

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junk

food

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consuming

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. One of the

solution

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is increasing

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food

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the food

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tax

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. There are several

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condition

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that

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government

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considered

these

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.

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, the higher

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fast

food

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applied

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of cost

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a meal

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meal

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.

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people

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their habit to make their own

food

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foor

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for

daily.

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, the

company

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will

lost

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their

constumer

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consumers

because the

food

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price is

expensive

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than used to be. The

government

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many

option

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the

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kinds of

tax

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policy

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based on the material that they used to

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.

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uneumployee

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tax

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has many employees

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the more taxes paid

company

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with many

employee

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will reduce the profit. The

company

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for efficiency. For that

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despite

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implication the

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for the number of unemployees.

Government

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taking

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more understanding before taking the

fast

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food

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regulation. To conclude that the

food

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tax

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especially

especilly

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especially

for fast

food

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to

creating

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healthier society. The several

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condition

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that should

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for

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Government

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the Government

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help to better

outcome

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both

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public and fast

food

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companies.