Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Every other person ought to have discipline in their
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often tend to follow the same routine and
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resist change while others believe that change brings out the best in them. Both the
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like to do
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things in their
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believe that repeating the same thing will make them perfect in their task and help them lead a healthy lifestyle.
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reduces the confusion or deciding
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, if Ruskin Bond had not maintained
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and always opted to try something new we might be deprived of his great works like "The eyes are not here" and " The platform number 8".
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differ in their opinion and they think that trying new things is always good. Trying new things out of one's comfort zone helps a person to develop and grow. It
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helps them to be ready for the changes and manage any situation. In my view, repeating the same thing and perfecting it is important
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taking
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tasks and trying to succeed in situations which are beyond one's expectation is necessary as it brings out the best in
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prepares for anything that
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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