Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each tyoe of crime. Others, however, argye that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, shoukd always be taken into account when deciding on the punishmen. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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in society is a controversial topic among policymakers ,

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there are two contrary approaches to declining it ,each side has benefits ,so ,I want to assume that the punishment will be effective if It chooses wisely to

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the intention of violence and is capable of correcting it ,so I am going to explain my thesis in upcoming paragraphs to clarify the topic.

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,there is a complex process to build

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behaviour

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called deviation of normal human manner which is deserved a punishment ,

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, we can not be sure only intentions have a responsibility to commit a behavioural deviation from individuals,

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a disorder

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schizophrenia

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the healthcare system be able to prevent

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but many times are not easy to cure them,so, it is so difficult to punish them by their intentions to limit the

crime

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ethical topic in forensic medicine.

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,It is not well understood whether we will be successful to stop occurs the specific heavy

crime

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as murder by doing

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intensive retribution,according to results of a research study which was conducted by the

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tax institution ,there is a sharp decrease in robbery,local quarrel and national defalcation when the had to pay great taxes and leave their jobs ,while felony like

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murder

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not diminished by execution,at a result, there seemed the

crime

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needs to clarify more by the forensic

devision

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division

in each society to know better ,so ,it may be the legislator to write a sensible law to prevent

crime

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. In conclusion , the punishment or knowing an intention of criminality must not be separated ,instance the combination

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can survive

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society from

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misbehaviours, so,I would not stand up with both

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in

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separately and I believe we need all to control our population.