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The best curriculum is not one based on a static body of knowledge, but one which teaches students to cope with change. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

#curriculum #body #students #change
In the recent era, there is a hot debate on
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 of schooling. A group of people argues that
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 way of
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 society. I personally agree with
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 issue and I strongly support my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, technology and industry are increasingly altering and job security has been
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 by taking the initiative to adapt
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In other words
, contemporary occupations and professions entail modern skills that receive through
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 and information. In
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 subjects
such
 as finance and accounting.
For example
, in Iran during the
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 sake of lack of enough skills in new work-related systems.
Thus
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 job is vulnerable now. After all, the role of flexibility in
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Moreover
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 are faced with
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 in various situations that are unforeseen. Thereby, instilling traditional and stable theories in universities
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 them to solve issues that are new- established.
Therefore
 higher
education
 should be well-rounded;
for instance
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 Tehran University is
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 of
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 educational system.
As a result
, novel instructions which are submitted in collages
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. In conclusion, I believe new
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 concerning
education
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unanticipated states.
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