The best curriculum is not one based on a static body of knowledge, but one which teaches students to cope with change. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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In the recent era, there is a hot debate on
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of schooling. A group of people argues that
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society. I personally agree with
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and information. In
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job is vulnerable now. After all, the role of flexibility in
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are faced with
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in various situations that are unforeseen. Thereby, instilling traditional and stable theories in universities
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them to solve issues that are new- established.
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higher
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Tehran University is
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of
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educational system.
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. In conclusion, I believe new
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and
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concerning
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are more functional for job
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with
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unanticipated states.
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