The best curriculum is not one based on static body of knowledge, but one which teaches students to cope with change. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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have creator minds. we should be able to use all their talents and skills with a proper plan.

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, many schools in developing countries are still focusing on those literary works which were written by people who lived in the ancient world

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more practical lessons and life and psychological skills in the curriculum. The research has proven in our

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are much easier to work after graduation because their curricula have been more practical.

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, just knowing will not help us if we can’t use it in a practical way. In fact,

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is not suitable for the young generation who want to be productive for a

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included in their programs. In conclusion, I believe curricula in each

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and must be considered in its dynamic aspect. Teaching courses should be limited to purely theoretical and only to the extent that it gives

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