Some people believe that bicycles are the best mode of transport in the cities while others disagree. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both views and give your opinion.

Cycling by
bicyles
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bicycle
bicycles
use for transportation which is
to
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public transportation. In my
opinion
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cycling make body health because when you ride you must out a
lot
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energy the same
like
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when you by foot. Advantages with use
bycycle
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bicycle
is
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cheap for you who is to low budget. Because ride
bycycle
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bicycle
you must only
have
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feel good do not you feel sick. And
disadvantages
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for
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cycling is when you
looks
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sick you must use other public transportation. Even though
,
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is good for
body
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but when you get ill you must
do
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not ride by
bicyles
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bicycles
bicycle
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