In the future, robots will do more and more jobs instead of humans. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages

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Robotics technology has been progressively improving throughout the years. These breakthroughs may lead to the transfer of the majority of the day-to-day jobs performed by humankind to
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more advantages than disadvantages. The upsides of having advanced machinery doing the work are enhanced efficiency and less cost. Since humans tend to deliver slowly and are prone to mistakes, these machines have the ability to work faster with higher accuracy. In terms of financial reduction, there is a fewer operating
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by automating the workflows.
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, Amazon, they have automated its warehousing and delivery services which is achieving improved productivity and a lower budget. Another benefit of
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is that an individual or a company may focus on productive tasks rather than administrative ones. By having
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do the cleaning of the houses, serving in the hotel and restaurants or acting as reception in the airports, other resources can be designated for other tasks
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as strategising and planning. Though these are beneficial, one can argue the negative consequences of them. Mainly the drawbacks of
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of jobs and malfunctions. Since companies may use these
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they will be unemployed and may struggle to find new ones.
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,
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can be resolved by equipping them with new digitalisation skills to
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, if there’s
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these equipment
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,
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there will be
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of production.
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or redundancy to ensure it will cover the full demand. In conclusion, I believe that these advantages outweigh the disadvantages due to the far greater results that
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can deliver. Through these advances, inefficiencies in the processes are eliminated leading improved economy. One can argue that there are risks of unemployment & faulty machines ,
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these can be mitigated.
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