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Many animals are facing extinction in the wild. Why is this happening? What can be done to protect them?

#animals #extinction
Wild
animals
 are one of the important assets to the country.
However
 ,Nowadays,The number of wild species count are drastically reducing especially Snakes,The Tiger,etc .
This
 could be due to the medical values of the wild
animals
 as well as some
people
 thinks,The
animals
 are endangering their environment.The government has taken many preventative measures to protect them along with educating
people
 about their imagination. The major reason for decreasing is due to hunting down the
animals
 for medical value purposes.There are many
animals
 that were killed by human beings to get their skins,
such
 as Horns,Etc.These are gain good values in the black market to do research for Cancer,Tuberculosis,and,so on,
For instance
 ,Some
people
 believe a Black cobra skull contains green pearl which will earn millions in the market.
Secondly
,Peoples who stay near the forest surrounding are afraid of
animals
 so to protect their families,they put fencing around the home which is connected with High-Voltage electricity.When crossing the fence
animals
 were killed due to the supply of electricity.
However
,
people
 do
such
 activities for them to earn money and some
people
 do it for their own safety precautions.But they need to understand without them we would not survive for a longer span of time.By considering
this
,The government has taken many preventive precautions to protect them from
such
 incidents.
For example
,The
people
 who kill the
animals
 for their own benefits will be executed and the government re-validating existing
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 to protect against their attack.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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