The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show what new features are proposed to change on the actual

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, in the proposed plan, the living

room

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is bigger than the existing

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the proposal gives more advantages to getting into and out of the rooms effectively. The actual ground

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has two internal walls that separate

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rooms.

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, these rob

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between the kitchen and the living

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. Compared with the new proposal, eliminating one of these walls would be a better use of the

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and comfort.

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, in the living

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by eliminating its wall,

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room

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covered the

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of the wall.

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, in the new ,ground the addition of

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kitchen furniture gives more commodities for the storage of

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food than the actual

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. As the illustration shows, the wall of

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area will be cut for the installation of

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internal door.

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mobility between the two rooms on the

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