The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs below show what new features are proposed to change on the actual
floor
.
Overall
, in the proposed plan, the living room
is bigger than the existing floor
. It is clear that
the proposal gives more advantages to getting into and out of the rooms effectively.
The actual ground floor
has two internal walls that separate two
rooms. Correct article usage
the two
Consequently
, these rob space
between the kitchen and the living room
. Compared with the new proposal, eliminating one of these walls would be a better use of the space
and comfort. For example
, in the living room
by eliminating its wall, this
room
covered the space
of the wall.
Furthermore
, in the new ,ground the addition of the
kitchen furniture gives more commodities for the storage of Correct article usage
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the
food than the actual Correct article usage
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space
. As the illustration shows, the wall of this
area will be cut for the installation of a
internal door. Change the article
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