You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -Explain the important -Apologize for the situation -Suggest a new arrangement

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, I am unhappy to inform you that I could not visit your place

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letter to inform my regret. There is a wedding ceremony of a cousin on the 22nd of July. I am unable to do not participate in that party because she is very close to me rather than a relative. suddenly, they have to change their function date due to they got visas to migrate to Canada before the 31st of July. Unfortunately,

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England. I think you can understand the situation that I faced. I know you are waiting for my arrival and I apologize again that I make bothered you.

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, I will arrange another date in September to visit your home. I think it will be better owing to the summer season in your country and we can enjoy a lot of spending time in the gardens. Please inform me if you have another arrangement for September. I am looking forward to your immediate response. Yours sincerely, Eva

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -Explain the important -Apologize for the situation -Suggest a new arrangement

More students should choose to do voluntary work during the long holidays rather than working for money. Discuss both views.

Many people spend all their money as they get it, rather than saving for the future. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays, some older people choose to live in the retirement communities with other people, rather than living with their adult children.

In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.