You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -Explain the important -Apologize for the situation -Suggest a new arrangement

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Dear

Oneli

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One

, I am unhappy to inform you that I could not visit your place

month. I am writing

this

letter to inform my regret. There is a wedding ceremony of a cousin on the 22nd of July. I am unable to do not participate in that party because she is very close to me rather than a relative. suddenly, they have to change their function date due to they got visas to migrate to Canada before the 31st of July. Unfortunately,

that is

why I can not

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come

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England. I think you can understand the situation that I faced. I know you are waiting for my arrival and I apologize again that I make bothered you.

However

, I will arrange another date in September to visit your home. I think it will be better owing to the summer season in your country and we can enjoy a lot of spending time in the gardens. Please inform me if you have another arrangement for September. I am looking forward to your immediate response. Yours sincerely, Eva

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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