Write a letter to a local authority by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. - Mention about the current sports facilities available - What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced? - How would the new sports facilities be a help for the people in your age group?

Dear Sir, I, resident of Park Street, writing
this
letter to make a request for additional sports facilities for youth in
this
area. Currently, there are so many facilities available in
this
locality.
Firstly
, there is an outdoor stadium for players of Cricket which is very fruitful for them.
Secondly
, Boxing coaches
also
provide good services to the children.
Thirdly
, there is a swimming club
also
which is advantageous for various people.
Although
this
society has myriad amenities related to sports and fitness yet there is a need to provide other basic services as well. Primarily, Authorities should introduce facilities related to our national sport hockey. There are various hockey players living nearby who want to join an academy in order to enjoy their activity. Apart from
this
, there is a need to provide a resource kit to the top performers in order to motivate them.
This
new facility will be very beneficial for youngsters as they will get a chance to grow more and promote the national game as well. Providing free resource materials will help various young minds who can not purchase these items.
Thus
, It would be really commendable if you could provide these amenities to children. Hope you will take
this
into kind consideration. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.
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