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The best curriculum is not one based on static body of knowledge, but one which teaches students to cope with change. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#curriculum #body #students #change
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There is a hot debate on what factors about be considered in program education. One group opines that the best curriculum should be a dynamic
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 of knowledge, while others believe that it can be a static
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. In the recent era, it seems a hot debate about the structure of education is a serious issue. I completely agree with
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 statement
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 not one based on the static
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 of knowledge, and in
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 I will discuss why
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 with, the best curriculum should allocate all of the aspects of
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. The
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 have creator minds. we should be able to use all their talents and skills with a proper plan.
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, many schools in developing countries are still focusing on those literary works which were written by people who lived in the ancient world
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, we should teach more practical lessons and life and psychological skills in the curriculum. Research has proven in our
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students
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 who study at technical college are much easier to work after graduation because their curricula have been more practical.
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, just knowing will not help us if we can’t use it in a practical way. In fact, a static
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 of knowledge is not suitable for the young generation who want to be productive for a
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. Nowadays must be competent enough to deal with computer work, multitask research, and communicative issues due to the world being the digital world.
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, updated courses and operations that are needed for
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' future should be evaluated
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 included in their programs. In conclusion, I believe curricula in each
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 are based on the needs and policies of that
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 and must be considered in its dynamic aspect. Teaching courses should be limited to purely theoretical and only to the extent that it gives
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 sufficient insight.
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