Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experince and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

With the agreeable order of the day, it cannot be denied that higher

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such

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as

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is crucial for everyone.

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to that, a

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degree

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could give you a good position in a company.

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, some people might think that getting

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and developing soft skills are more important than pursuing a

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degree

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. I have to disagree with the

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later

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statement because as a former

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student, I had the chance to

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higher

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when most disadvantaged people in my country could not

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experience

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. A

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degree

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is attained through a rigorous process where students are forced to give their best when doing their tasks. Aside from that, students are constantly challenged when faced

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a wide range of learning materials,

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example

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international publications, research papers, and academic books. These two factors are essential for a

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's personal growth and

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decision-making skill.

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, a

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with a Bachelor's or Master's

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and a high GPA is most likely to be employed by a multinational company rather than a

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with no educational

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.

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is caused by company policies that demand employment candidates to have outstanding resumes filled with a

university

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degree

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and relevant work

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. Despite that, some people who are mostly elders still think that getting

experience

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and developing soft skills are more important for a

person

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's future career path. These ideas could come from their inability to access higher

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and proper learning materials in the past.

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,

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has become more accessible for younger generations like mine. Studying at home could be done with

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and all types of information are available

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it.

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, there is no reason for someone to not be enrolled in

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if they have the means to do it

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because it would be beneficial for them in the future.

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in the working field and development of soft skills could be done later in life after a

university

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degree

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has been received by that

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to conclude, I believe that a

university

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degree

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is crucial for someone's career path as it would be beneficial in getting employed by companies.

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, a

university

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degree

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would help a

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in designing a good resume.