Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experince and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

With the agreeable order of the day, it cannot be denied that higher

education

such

as

university

is crucial for everyone.

In addition

to that, a

university

degree

could give you a good position in a company.

However

, some people might think that getting

experience

and developing soft skills are more important than pursuing a

university

degree

. I have to disagree with the

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later

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statement because as a former

university

student, I had the chance to

experience

higher

education

when most disadvantaged people in my country could not

experience

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. A

university

degree

is attained through a rigorous process where students are forced to give their best when doing their tasks. Aside from that, students are constantly challenged when faced

by

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a wide range of learning materials,

for

example

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international publications, research papers, and academic books. These two factors are essential for a

person

's personal growth and

their

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decision-making skill.

For instance

, a

person

with a Bachelor's or Master's

degree

and a high GPA is most likely to be employed by a multinational company rather than a

person

with no educational

backgrounds

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.

This

is caused by company policies that demand employment candidates to have outstanding resumes filled with a

university

degree

and relevant work

experience

. Despite that, some people who are mostly elders still think that getting

experience

and developing soft skills are more important for a

person

's future career path. These ideas could come from their inability to access higher

education

and proper learning materials in the past.

However

,

education

has become more accessible for younger generations like mine. Studying at home could be done with

internet

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and all types of information are available

in

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it.

Therefore

, there is no reason for someone to not be enrolled in

university

if they have the means to do it

,

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because it would be beneficial for them in the future.

Experience

in the working field and development of soft skills could be done later in life after a

university

degree

has been received by that

person

.

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to conclude, I believe that a

university

degree

is crucial for someone's career path as it would be beneficial in getting employed by companies.

Moreover

, a

university

degree

would help a

person

in designing a good resume.