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Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of the hosting nation. Others believe that these events are mainly a large unjustifiable expense. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many countries are looking forward
for
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 an opportunity to host
a
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 international sporting
event
 in their
country
. Some people believe that it is an ideal situation to show the world
it's
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 qualities while some believe these events are mainly large unjustifiable expenses.In
this
 essay,
firstly
 I will discuss the opportunities and
secondly
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i
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 will mention the cons of hosting
a
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 international sporting
event
 as
i
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 partially agree with both proponents and opponents.
To begin
 with, hosting
a
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 international sporting
event
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as
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 Olympics,
South
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 East Asian sport meets will help the
country
 to showcase
it's
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 abilities.
For instance
, the 2021
olympics
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was
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 held in Japan. they made
this
a
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 opportunity to promote their
country
 globally. After the
event
, they were able to make international headlines
on
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 their
infrastructral
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infrastructural
infrastructure
 development and their hospitality.
Moreover
,
such
 events attract tourists from worldwide and will increase the
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foreign
foriegn
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foreign
 currency rate in a
country
.
On the other hand
, due to these
events
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 a
country
 lose
large
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 sum of money.
This
 is true because in order to get the
sponserhip
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sponsorship
 a
country
 should be able to cover the expenses.
Additionally
, a
country
 should
also
 have to complete
standard
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 level of development in infrastructure. In conclusion, it is clear that hosting an international sporting
event
 in a
country
 has both pons and cons but in my point of
view
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 the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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