In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some cultures,

children

are often told that if they try hard enough, they could achieve anything.

Firstly

,

this

essay will describe the advantages of

this

message

and

secondly

, it will explain the disadvantages of

this

message

.

First

of all, the advantages of telling

children

to

work

hard are giving them

confident

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confidence

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in achieving their

goals

, motivating and telling them not to give up their

goals

even when facing bottlenecks. The bright side of

this

message

is telling

children

that if they are trying hard enough, everything is possible to be achieved. Even though in reality, achieving anything we want is not easy but it is possible if we have put enough

effort

and patience

on

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trying and working hard.

On the other hand

, telling

children

to

work

hard enough can

also

be

describing

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as encouraging the

children

to contribute their best

effort

while achieving their

goals

.

Secondly

, the disadvantages of

this

message

are

children

might be giving up

to try

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trying

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if they did not achieve what they want after

contributed

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their best

effort

, not only that they might

lost

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lose

be lost

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in

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confidence. Under

this

circumstance, they probably will give up on working hard and

loss

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lose

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of interest in achieving their

goals

. In conclusion, telling

children

to

work

hard in order to achieve anything they want is a good start to encourage them but sometimes hard

work

doesn’t pay off soon as thing doesn’t come easily. In my point of view, we must always contribute our best

effort

and be

patience

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patient

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on

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achieving anything we want.