some people believe that travelling alone really benefits in learning countrie's culture and experience while others believe it is better to travelling with someone you know.Discuss both views and share your opinion.

In
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today's
today
todays
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world travelling has become
common
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activity among
the
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young
people
as it provides
pool
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of opportunities.
However
, some
people
believe that
solo
travelling benefits
in
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learning and experiencing and some others oppose it. I agree with both views and in
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I will
firstly
discuss
about
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solo
travelling and
secondly
about travelling with a partner.
To begin
with,
people
travel
to learn and experience about
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countries
country's
countrie's
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country's
culture. When the travellers commute
solo
, it will give them the freedom to experience as there is no one to restrict,
as a result
, the
people
who
travel
alone can go anywhere and
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experience
exxperience
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experience
the culture without any limits.
Additionally
.they are able to build up their confidence as they have to survive by themselves. To elaborate on
this
matter
further
, when an introvert traveled to a country alone they have to
communate
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communicate
with strangers in order to survive.
Thus
, it will boost
up
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their confidence.
On the other hand
, travelling with someone you know has several benefits
such
as the security and limitation of expenditure.
For instance
, especially when a girl is travelling alone it will be
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difficult
diffcult
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difficult
for her to
travel
at night and
also
to visit certain locations as she has to be concerned about her safety.But, if she
commute
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with some she knows it will be easy for her to be safe.
Furthermore
, when travelling together they can participate in fun activities and would not feel lonely.
Moreover
, visiting countries with another person will help to save money as they can share accommodation, food and other expenses. In conclusion,
traveling
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together and alone has both advantages and
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disadvantages
disadvanatages
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disadvantages
and I believe that they both are important depending on the place the person is travelling
.
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Even though, travelling
solo
helps to widen the knowledge it
also
has some risks like getting in danger. So the person commuting should
chose
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wisely whether to
travel
alone or with someone.
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