WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter explain your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am going to start my college education

year in the UK. I want to stay in a college Hall of Residence. I would appreciate it If you can give me the information which I need. I need something not so expensive in the price. Ideally up to 800 pounds per month. I want a single bedroom with a bathroom and a living area with a sofa, tv-screen and a desk with a chair.

Also

, I would like to let you know that I do not have any special dietary needs and just need to keep eating healthily, my usual daily nutrient intake must include protein, healthy carbs and fat. If there is nothing available for my needs at

this

time what other options you can suggest to me? Thank you in advance and looking forward to hearing from you back. Yours Faithfully,

Sattor

Correct your spelling

Sattar

Kadirov

Submitted by kadirov.sattor755 on Mon Jul 04 2022

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

150 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Hall of Residence
Accommodation requirements
Single room
Quiet environment
Proximity
Special requirements
Disability access
Living conditions
Dietary restrictions
Vegetarian
Vegan
Halal
Kosher
Allergy-sensitive
Alternative arrangements
Meal plan
Prompt response
Introductory sentence
Polite
Effective study
En-suite facilities
Recommendations
Campus facilities
Flexible
Consideration

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