For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter- * state what type of membership you have and how much you have paid for it? * explain how you have benefited from the club * give reasons on why you want to leave

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Dear Sir, I hope

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letter finds you in good health. I am writing to you in connection with the discontinuation of the club membership. Currently, I am having an annual membership vide Receipt No 450 and I renewed it a month before. For the purpose of renewal, I had paid an advance amount of Rs. 20,000/- after availing of the discount of Rs. 4,000/- in total. I was using all the amenities provided by the club which benefited me a lot. Gymnasium service helped me to reduce my body weight and enables me to maintain my health. Earlier I was suffering from obesity,

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, now I get rid of

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disease due to regular exercise.

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I enjoyed all the services rendered by the club yet I want to cancel my membership because of my transfer to another city.

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, It would be really commendable if you could please process the cancellation and refund the balance at the earliest. Looking forward to hearing a positive and speedy action from your side. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.

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