A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position

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Having a big
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near the
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area
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will have both advantages and disadvantages, which
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influence the environment of the
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. Some
people
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will favour the idea of having a large
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near the
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while some will oppose
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. As far as I am concerned, I will oppose
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idea and I think
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way for two reasons, which I will explore in
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essay. As an initial point, I would like to say that, if there is any
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whether large or small, it will always create
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both air
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and noise
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.
Pollution
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near the
community
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area
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will put adverse effects on
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's health as well.
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, various diseases can thrive in
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society,
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as
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asthma, cough, nausea, skin disease and many more
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-related diseases. I believe that
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pollution
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is the biggest disadvantage of having a
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near the
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area
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, there will be less availability of land near society, which can be utilised for parks or for the children playing ground. That land will now be used for
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purposes.
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, while considering the advantages, I think the number of vacancies will increase for the
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. Those who are living near to industry
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,
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can commute very easily to their office and will
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save their time. Some
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who are living very far from their work,
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have to spend hours only in reaching
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the office
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.
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type of situation makes a person tired very easily.
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, one can not easily give a hundred per cent time to their work and
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, having an office near to living
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is time-saving and relaxing. In conclusion, I believe that building a large
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near the
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is not a very great idea, as in my point of view it has more disadvantages than benefits. I prefer to have factories outside the
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area
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because of the clean atmosphere and the availability of more outer space for children to play.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic growth
  • infrastructure development
  • local businesses
  • unemployment rates
  • pollution
  • residents' health
  • noise and traffic congestion
  • social tensions
  • community dynamics
  • boost the local economy
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