A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position

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Having a big

factory

near the

community

area

will have both advantages and disadvantages, which

also

influence the environment of the

community

accordingly

. Some

people

will favour the idea of having a large

factory

near the

community

while some will oppose

this

. As far as I am concerned, I will oppose

this

idea and I think

this

way for two reasons, which I will explore in

this

essay. As an initial point, I would like to say that, if there is any

factory

whether large or small, it will always create

pollution

both air

pollution

and noise

pollution

Pollution

near the

community

area

will put adverse effects on

people

's health as well.

As a result

, various diseases can thrive in

the

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society,

such

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asthma, cough, nausea, skin disease and many more

pollution

-related diseases. I believe that

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pollution

is the biggest disadvantage of having a

factory

near the

community

area

Secondly

, there will be less availability of land near society, which can be utilised for parks or for the children playing ground. That land will now be used for

factory

purposes.

Subsequently

, while considering the advantages, I think the number of vacancies will increase for the

people

. Those who are living near to industry

area

they

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can commute very easily to their office and will

also

save their time. Some

people

who are living very far from their work,

they

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have to spend hours only in reaching

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the office

everyday

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Such

type of situation makes a person tired very easily.

Hence

, one can not easily give a hundred per cent time to their work and

therefore

, having an office near to living

area

is time-saving and relaxing. In conclusion, I believe that building a large

factory

near the

community

is not a very great idea, as in my point of view it has more disadvantages than benefits. I prefer to have factories outside the

community

area

because of the clean atmosphere and the availability of more outer space for children to play.

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Topic Vocabulary:

economic growth
infrastructure development
local businesses
unemployment rates
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residents' health
noise and traffic congestion
social tensions
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