As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is apparent that business entities benefit the most in light of the era of industrialization.

Therefore

,

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notion that great profits are synonymous with many substantial roles, which they have to play in

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society, is raised. Personally, I totally lean towards the idea

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2 major compelling justifications. When it comes to

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responsibility of businesses, perhaps the major contribution of each entity is their financial obligation to the government

tax

revenue.

In other words

, transparency in

tax

declaration and fulfilling

tax

responsibilities

is not only surge

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national economic prosperity but

also

increase

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public welfare and

subsidizes

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subsidies

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aiming at workers

such

as

healthy

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insurance, maternity insurance,

unemployment

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insurance. In return for the obligation, business enterprises, especially the small-scale ones, can be granted various supports from

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purse

such

as capital allowance,

tax

relief and credits for research and development,

enterprise

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investment

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. What is more, maximizing profits seems to be the most practical aim of every entity;

however

, creating and maintaining

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CSR - abbreviation for

cooperate

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social responsibility, is the driving force for its existence in a competitive market. Alternatively stated, if a company use a proportion of their income into many social-benefit programs and

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a long way towards manifesting

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business

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and social responsibilities, the company tend to draw more attention from consumers as well as arouse considerable public sympathy.

Besides

CSR, which usually costs colossal time and money, social duties can be done successfully within their own enterprise. Enhancing working

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and living

standard

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for workers is cited as the most radical action. Given the win-win relationships between employees and employers as well as the unshaken importance of staff members as the primary force behind every fruition, I am convinced that they must

therefore

be treated well in terms of finance and living aspects. In conclusion, taking the aforementioned responsibilities not only benefits

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society but has a decisive bearing on the reinforced existence and amelioration of all businesses. Because of

this

2-way profitable knit, I am of the notion of social obligation of

enterprise

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.