You want to sell your bicycle. Your friend has told you that his cousin might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend’s cousin. In your letter explain why you are selling the bicycle describe the bicycle and how much it will cost suggest a date when your friend’s cousin can come and see the bicycle

Dear Tom, Hope
this
letter finds you well. I am Tip who is the best friend of your cousin ,John. I am doing fine except
being
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a little busy
to find
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a new motorcycle. Since I have just got a new job offer in the city, I have decided to sell my
bicycle
. and I heard from John that you like it. So, I am writing to you if
you
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still interested. I thought that would be great if you buy it
instead
of some strangers. I would like
to begin
by informing you that the
bicycle
I want to offer is in great condition since I have recently replaced a break and
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wheels, with a lot of upgrades. It
also
has a safety lock that can prevent stealing. So, you will not worry about
this
matter. The
bicycle
is red and black in colour, and it is very lightweight. I would like to sell at AUD 200. I guess that you have already got some
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about the condition of my
bicycle
from the description I gave, but if you are really interested to buy it, please come to my place
next
week, and see the
bicycle
yourself. Best regards, Tip
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