In modern society, many people think that primary schools should teach science and technology rather than history and geography which are useless and boring. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

It is certainly true that
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educational institutes have
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role to make successful tomorrow of children. It
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by some citizens that learners must learn a subject that relates to
science
instead
of
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on courses which is teaching about
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and geography of the world. I agree with the former statement as
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of
science
subjects
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fruitful for pupils.
To begin
,with positive outcomes to
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courses
such
as biology ,
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in
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educational curriculum.
Firstly
, these
subjects
can act as a stress buster for them because children do not only assimilate theoretically knowledge but
also
pay attention to practical information of
science
.
Consequently
, they can learn facts and theories with lab practices which are beneficial for them.
For instance
, according to a survey done by
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Delhi university is that most
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an
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Indian
student
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students
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give preference to physics, chemistry,
biology
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to get information related to
science
and learn things quickly by doing practicals.
Moreover
, because of job
prospects
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pupils have
interest
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in technical
subjects
since nowadays with
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of
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technology, technical jobs are in demand in the markets.
Thus
if teenagers have completed
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in
science
then
they would easily pursue
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successful
career
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in multinational companies.
For example
, many
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firms like Amazon hire technical students by paying them
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package of income to make their company profitable in the market with assistance from these youngsters. In conclusion, learning academics ought to propel
learner
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learners
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for
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science-related
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science related
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course
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courses
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because it is
easily
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to study and
student
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students
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can understand it quickly and for better job opportunities they need to learn technical
subjects
.
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