Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. discuss both views and give your opinion. give reason for your answer an include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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argue that historical
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have noting or small parts that can be useful to us,
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, others believe that learning from past
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can help us better understand the recent situation or future. I completely agree with
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can tell us much more things about past
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that could lead to a better stand-in the present
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and help future movements.
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why historical
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can bring better
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for the present
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. Some
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may say that past historical event
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cannot tell us much information. Perhaps, they think that past
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have already gone and
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need to focus on the present
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, so should be moving forward.
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, If they might think about past
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, they could be getting
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or afraid judged by others which might lead to hard times.
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, there is a lot of knowledge humans can gain from
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learning about their
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is entirely necessary for their life which could help avoid big risks or mistakes.
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, if we look at our personal lives, we could learn many things obtained from life experiences in our past
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quite similar to a nation or society. Another example is that the Covid pandemic has been thought us many lessons about how to prevent widespread pandemics and how to tackle that epidemic around the world together.
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, it is essential for humans willing to learn and gain experience from the
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. In conclusion, there are many different opinions about
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at the present
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. I think, a minority of
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ignore past
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and the majority of
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believe that there is so much knowledge we could gain from our
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