Fewer young people do farming work in rural areas. Why? Should young people be encouraged to do farming work?

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people

assume that there are fewer young generations who live in rural areas to

work

for

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agriculture than they may be.

This

is caused by low salaries and the limited sources of materials and following

this

, I believe it is

of

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necessity

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to encourage them to do farming

work

. On the one hand, the reasons why not enough adolescents do the farmers’

work

are varied.

Firstly

, the foremost factor is due to the small amount of money they receive. Apparently, they can not earn their living

by

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those incomes.

Furthermore

, there are more and more young

people

who are inclined to settle down in the urban areas that possess a golden point of occupations

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with foreign industries, which

offers

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the

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higher sum of money.

Secondly

, living in the countryside means having less access to the sources of investment in materials than staying in the cities, which is

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immense deterrent of developing

this

sector.

Therefore

, the young can not afford whatever they want to meet their needs.

On the other hand

, it is necessary for young

people

to be inspired to become farmers. With the non-stop growing process of technologies, they can easily grow the harvest without wasting time and

labors

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labor

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.

For instance

, strawberries are able to be grown in greenhouses which have

automatically

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watering systems.

Furthermore

, the government should apply cutting-edge machines so that it will be more appealing for teenagers to serve

for

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agriculture

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agricultures

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agriculture

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.

Also

,

the

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thorough insight into

the

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farming

work

of them can help boost the position of farmers

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improving

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the number of young

people

do

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farming

work

. In conclusion, the farming

work

are

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done less and less by young generations who stay in rural regions.

This

is owing to the little paid together with restricted resources and the young should be encouraged to do more farming jobs by the authorities so that it can enhance the economic growth of any

countries

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.