As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems. What are these problems for young people living in cities? What are possible solutions for these problems?
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discussed
the problems of these young people living there and how can these be solved.
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major cities around the globe is the existence of peer pressure. Correct article usage
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For instance
, when a youngster belongs to a group they tend to follow the actions of what the other members are doing, Linking Words
such
as drinking alcohol or drugs. They think that it is essential to do it Linking Words
otherwise
they will be removed from the group and get bullied instantly. Linking Words
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also
means a lot of opportunities for jobs which distracts these kids from finishing their education. Linking Words
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example, if they get a big offer from a company, some of them will stop studying because they will find it more convenient to earn money rather than Correct article usage
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first
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guidance of parents that allows them to live in Correct article usage
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For example
, families should consistently monitor these younger groups for them to feel supported and will not need bad habits to sustain them. Linking Words
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government
should be involved in mandating strict curfews to Add an article
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drugs and alcohol misuse. Correct article usage
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Therefore
, if these will be exercised well it will create so much difference and better lives.
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downfall of major cities for younger people living there and presented solutions on how they can overcome it. In my opinion, if the new generation will be more responsible Change preposition
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