A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

With the rapid development of various transportation,

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become easier to travel anywhere.

Tourism

not only

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huge financial income to local government

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but sometimes

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bring some problems which are difficult to deal with. As far as I am concerned,

although

there are several disadvantages for visitors build some problems when they having a trip, I still think benefits are more than drawbacks. Some

people

will forget basic ethic concepts and forget to control their behaviours when they are travelling. Nowadays,

people

have more resources to find out some local secret spots which are already banned or closed by governments. In

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the internet world,

people

like to share personal status or travel experiences on websites. In order to obtain more followers, some bloggers will ignore the rules of historical spots or landscapes and take photos

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post them on social media.

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that will lead more and more

people

to want to try the same thing. The reasons that the place was shut down must due to its dangerous level or security issue. Environment protection is another problem that some visitors would not take care of the places or clean up the trash which is made from them, so lots of natural scenes will disappear in the future very soon. Without

tourism

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nations will lose opportunities to promote themselves to the world or get more money.

Firstly

, the most foundational method to make the whole world know a place is to import more tourists as

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possible. Set a high and good reputation not only by some global records or celebrities, touring was

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an important role.

Secondly

, those

people

who come from different countries or places must bring some business changes that will make huge income for local stores and governments to enhance their local development. In conclusion,

tourism

seems to be necessary for most countries

although

it sometimes brings some problems. For me, getting rid of bad habitat during travelling should be managed by everyone,

tourism

still has more benefits than drawbacks.