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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or diagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

#price #petrol #traffic #pollution #diagree #measures
Recently,some folk think increasing the expense of
petrol
 is the better method of solving transit and infection issue. Another challenge
this
 opinion said is that have some impacts but is not enough to decrease questions.We
also
 need to do many more measure ways. I fully agree with the latter,there are some reasons and examples.
First
 of all,as we know,community more use their own cars, if the authority can increase the
petrol
 expense, the public will reduce using own private vehicles, choosing to use other public transportation, In
this
 way, the means traffic jam,air deterioration and noise abuse will reduce far more than before. In some manufacturers using
petrol
 make production or industry,
this
 industrial trends
also
 will cut down by human action. Meanwhile, the
petrol
 rate will add taxation to the state. It is an extra company and individual stress.
Petrol
 is a precious resource from nature,
this
 way helps the ministry better control
petrol
 use.
On the other hand
, only increasing the price of
petrol
 is not enough to cut down transport and corruption issues. It should be adding more measures. Some evidence reveals transport and pollution disputes are caused by a variety of reasons. Following technology development and science process more and more economy demand for
petrol
 to help to progress,
such
 as trade, travel and other economic activities.
Nevertheless
, extra
petrol
 cost will be caused by company taxation stress.The transport system
also
 has an important role in shipment problems,science measures the transit system, and some road traffic lights should not be waiting a long time at a junction.
This
 way can reduce time during rush hour, but at the same time ,abuse is caused by others reasons.
For instance
, industry production economic activities and agriculture pollution. The environment pollution is a big field .not only reduce
petrol
 amount can be resolved. In conclusion, increasing the
petrol
 demand from the politics can reduce some transit and infection trouble, but not enough from
this
, the community
also
 need to do other measures to protect our earth environment.
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