Holding international games such as olympics is an exciting event. Some think it has positive effect, while others argue it is a waste of money. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Playing

games

was always and now has become a

sought after

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recreational activity for

masses

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.

However

, there is a conundrum among the people whether organising multinational

games

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umpteen favourable effects or they are worthless . The forthcoming paragraphs of

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essay will

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explicate both the views and justify why doing

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is

much- needed

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. To embark with,

importance

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the importance

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of international sports activities

such

as

olympic

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Olympic

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games

and commonwealth

games

are

noticable

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noticeable

for the overall development of the people as well as nations. To elucidate, these events slightly increase the economy of the host country

alongwith

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along with

many other industries like hotel, transport and new start-ups because millions of

sport

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lovers come to enjoy their favourite competitions and in

this

way

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they spend a huge amount of money to avail all the facilities at their convenience.

Moreover

,

fussion

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fusion

of culture

also

takes place as people of different backgrounds all around the world, mix up here and meet with one another. On the

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flipside

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of the coin, some think that a large part of

money

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the money

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is being wasted by the authorities. To elaborate, it would be better to alleviate uncountable pressing problems

such

as unemployment, poor education system,

lack

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and lack

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of modern medical facilities rather than squandering assets on these leisure activities.

Furthermore

, many antisocial and unethical deeds are

also

practiced

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by the visitors.

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, there was a hike in sex rackets during

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asian

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games

in 2010 in India. To conclude, after examining both the views, I supposed that these

sport

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activities are imperative not only for

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the individual

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individual

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but

also

for a country.

Although

, these events should be organised after a prudent proposition.