You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter: explain why you took the job describe the problems that you experienced suggest what could be done about them
Dear manager,
I am writing to you to express you I noticed there are some problems in your accounting system and other sections which I paid your attention to them because most of them have a significant impact on your benefit's company.
Firstly
, I should say, I will graduate in accounting next
June, for this
reason, I had to find part-time work also
because of my practical survey about make more benefit at companies I choose your company and became hire as an accountant assistant.
After a few days and when I evaluated your accounting system I found some huge costs which must be in basic costs, be deducted of current benefits. this
method has expired also
I see your accountant considers some of the future income , instead
of current income and it has a bad impact on your total benefit.
I have some suggestions to create desirable conditions , for example
, you can replace your old accounting system with another , in addition
, your accountant has to recognize each transaction correct in terms of time.
Thank you for taking the time and your consideration of my letter.
Yours faithfully,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite