You forgot an item of clothing at the hotel where you stayed recently. Write a letter to the hotel manager and include the following: – When did you stay and in what room? – Describe the item you left behind. – What would you like the manager to do about it?

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to bring to your notice, the belongings that we have potentially missed grabbing

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while checking out of your hotel at 312 Bourke street. For your records and reference, My husband and I booked the room for, June 20-June 30 of

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month. Our room was situated on level 5, and the room number was 501. I am ,

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, putting a description and specifications of the items in order to, make the task easier for you: There are two bags. The

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bag

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is a labelled Zara signature

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, with 2 pairs of jeans and 1 pink scarf. The

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bad is a Louis Vitton

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that contains the signature blue and white stripe clutch

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in it.

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, Both the bags should have receipts with my name (Sara Hamilton) on them. Now that you have the details of the same, I would request if you could hand these over to, Mr Jack paul (one of our friends) who will be picking it up anytime and day,

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week.

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, do let me know in case you require any

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details along with, anything you need the person to bring as an identification. We thank you for providing us with a wonderful stay, meanwhile, our special gratitude for

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help. Looking forward to hearing from you! Yours sincerely, Shagun Rodhe

Submitted by shagun.rodhe on Thu Jul 07 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

224 words

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