Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits, TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that national similarities are becoming more apparent annually cutting across almost every dimension of human existence ranging from fashion sense to even television programs currently. In my opinion, I believe that the positive aspects of
this
change can not be compared to the threat in
the reduction of tourism and job opportunities associated with it.
Admittedly, there are some basic benefits of a mono-cultural universe. Change preposition
of
Firstly
, it serves as a unifying tool to
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for
bringing
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This
present development has resulted to
people having a better understanding Change preposition
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about
the Change preposition
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lifestyles
life styles
of foreign Correct your spelling
lifestyles
countries
. For example
, most Nigerian celebrities has
featured in different international movies Change the verb form
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thus
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the long run lead to a Change preposition
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Secondly
, similarities among countries
has
reduced barriers encountered in the migration of scholars. Most students Change the verb form
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for
instance, aspiring to study overseas are often reluctant because of a change in cuisine and fashion. Add the comma(s)
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However
, with this
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been halted to a great extent.
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Nevertheless
, despite the advantages above, I believe many countries
will face serious drawbacks by sharing the same cultural values. One serious problem is that it reduces the influx of tourists as many of them can experience similar
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trends
of
clothing , watch TV series and consume foreign dishes in their home Change preposition
in
countries
. This
will as a result
reduce some countries
such
as Dubai
gross domestic income as tourism is their primary source of revenue. Another issue is that job opportunities may be seriously affected as well, as more companies will tend to collaborate with another Change noun form
Dubai's
countries
brand of production Change noun form
country's
instead
of in-coperating
workers from their native Correct your spelling
cooperating
countries
. For example
, a survey on footwear supplies in Nigeria confirms that most distributors presently buys
from England (Nike company) Correct subject-verb agreement
buy
instead
of patronizing their local manufacturers because of the increase in demand of
another country's goods Change preposition
for
thus
increasing poverty
rate in some Correct article usage
the poverty
countries
.
In conclusion, reduction
in a country's revenue generation and job opportunities far outweighs any of the minor benefits Correct article usage
a reduction
such
as collaboration and migration that may stem from a mono-cultural ecology.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
