Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits, TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that national similarities are becoming more apparent annually cutting across almost every dimension of human existence ranging from fashion sense to even television programs currently. In my opinion, I believe that the positive aspects of
this
change can not be compared to the threat
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the reduction of tourism and job opportunities associated with it. Admittedly, there are some basic benefits of a mono-cultural universe.
Firstly
, it serves as a unifying tool
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bringing
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peace and harmony.
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present development has resulted
to
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people having a better understanding
about
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the
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lifestyles
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life styles
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lifestyles
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of foreign
countries
.
For example
, most Nigerian celebrities
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featured in different international movies
thus
,
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collaboration which will
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the long run lead to a
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globe.
Secondly
, similarities among
countries
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reduced barriers encountered in the migration of scholars. Most students
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instance, aspiring to study overseas are often reluctant because of a change in cuisine and fashion.
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revolutionary
happenings
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these factors
has
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been halted to a great extent.
Nevertheless
, despite the advantages above, I believe many
countries
will face serious drawbacks by sharing the same cultural values. One serious problem is that it reduces the influx of tourists as many of them can experience
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of
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clothing , watch TV series and consume foreign dishes in their home
countries
.
This
will
as a result
reduce some
countries
such
as
Dubai
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gross domestic income as tourism is their primary source of revenue. Another issue is that job opportunities may be seriously affected as well, as more companies will tend to collaborate with another
countries
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brand of production
instead
of in-
coperating
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cooperating
workers from their native
countries
.
For example
, a survey on footwear supplies in Nigeria confirms that most distributors presently
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from England (Nike company)
instead
of patronizing their local manufacturers because of the increase in demand
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another country's goods
thus
increasing
poverty
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the poverty
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rate in some
countries
. In conclusion,
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in a country's revenue generation and job opportunities far outweighs any of the minor benefits
such
as collaboration and migration that may stem from a mono-cultural ecology.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural globalization
  • Cultural exchange
  • Cross-cultural communication
  • Assimilation
  • Homogenization
  • Acculturation
  • Traditional customs
  • Local economies
  • Diversity
  • Inclusion
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