Your friend wants to send her/his child to learn music. He/she asked you for some information about the music academy that you went to. Write him/her a letter. You should: - Describe the music school - Suggest a teacher or a class to go to - Explain why you recommend it.
Dear Rohan,
Hello! I hope you and your family members are fine during
this
covid19 period. I am writing this
letter to inform about
my Correct pronoun usage
you about
music
class .
As you know, we are
met in Unnecessary verb
apply
garden
Add an article
the garden
last
week and you tell about your children that so much interest
in Replace the word
interested
music
.
The music
school is very near to my apartment so i
easily go Change the capitalization
I
to
there and it's Remove the preposition
apply
very
big campus. There are many facilities available and so many player instruments are here. Add an article
a very
Moreover
, reena
ma'am is Change the capitalization
Reena
very
polite person and Correct article usage
a very
have
lost Correct subject-verb agreement
has
of
knowledge about Change preposition
apply
music
.
You will also
put there
children on her.
Replace the word
their
However
, i
know you Change the capitalization
I
also
interested in Add a missing verb
are also
music
but you was not join
Change the verb form
did not join
music
class because you have some family responsibilities . Correct article usage
the music
This
school is very popular and trustable so i
recommend Change the capitalization
I
this
school .
Hope meet see you soon
Warm wishes,
NehaSubmitted by s.a.patadiya on
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- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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