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Success in life comes from hard work, dedication to the job at hand, and staying focused on the end goal irrespective of the outcome. The
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has been our bread and butter
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for many generations and losing
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to ST, hurt us. Looking back,
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has been an extraordinary journey that started
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of years ago with the formation of
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BL and Reiner was picked to lead the
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BL. We started a
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with
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for the
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generation
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back in December 2020. Rob Van Zeeland led the
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as TPL and Hari Sundararaman was the PM. The
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worked very hard over the past couple of years and we were able to showcase to
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of our technical capabilities and meeting schedules that
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begin with. Though we were able to meet
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of the specs and met the compressed schedule, the journey was not all smooth sailing. The specifications were extremely challenging and tested the limits of device physics. The
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stayed focused during
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challenging phase while we worked to root
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offset, linearity(RLIN) and PD memory(Light Leakage) issues. I am proud of the fact that we found a way to solve each one of these problems and along the way, we impressed
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with our execution. The
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in Plano worked closely with our colleagues in Munich and Hyderabad and there was excellent collaboration across
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. The Munich
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worked closely with the Plano
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during the dark offset root cause phase. All the hard work on
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helped to reestablish ams OSRAM as a strong partner for the
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at
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led to a Raptor RFP in February
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2022. It has been an agonizing wait for the past several months
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the award decision. The
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continued to stay patient and
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, we were awarded the Raptor Project
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week.
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for
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and ams OSRAM.
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was our number one goal to win back the
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and we did it! With Raptor, we embark on a new journey and we will see new challenges along the way, but I am confident the
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is well prepared to tackle them head-on. I am proud of our
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for being relentless and working very hard to make
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award happen. Let us stay in the moment and appreciate what we have accomplished. Congratulations to everyone involved.
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is an extraordinary achievement in many ways!
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of many more wins to come and we strive to expand to other sockets at
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in the future.
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