You forgot an item of clothing at the hotel where you stayed recently. Write a letter to the hotel manager and include the following: – When did you stay and in what room? – Describe the item you left behind. – What would you like the manager to do about it?

Dear sir , I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the clothing item which I left in your hotel room . I am Gurinder , resident of ludhiana . I visited Shimla on

4th

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of June with my family and stayed at your hotel Radisson for almost 2 days . We were living on the 3rd floor in room number 302. We checked out from your place on the morning of

6th

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the 6th

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of June. After I reach my destination, I realised that my shirt is left behind in the room . Actually, I packed all my stuff but forget to take a shirt which was hung on the wall of the washroom . It is of Zara brand and is black in colour . There is

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on the pocket of it as well as inside the collar.

Moreover

this

piece of clothing is very special to me ,as it was gifted to me by my husband on my birthday.

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, I request you to please ask your staff members to locate it and inform me on my contact number 1234455. I would really appreciate

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you could parcel

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because I am living in Ludhiana which is far away from Shimla . Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully , Gurinder Kaur .

Submitted by Kaurgurinder1905 on Thu Jul 07 2022

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8 paragraphs

224 words

6.50

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