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Advance in technology and automation demerit and merit

#advance #technology #automation #demerit #merit
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 way below Body Paragraph 1 Indeed, the use of technology has brought about many negative implications
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 our lives.
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 is particularly obvious in the area of unemployment. With technological improvements, Jobs, which were previously assigned to humans are now being taken over by machines. The banking
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 where
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 trend is particularly glaring as various automated teller machines and robotics has now been set up to take the jobs originally meant for humans,
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, laziness among students in our various schools
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 some of the
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 associated with technology, as most of them will rather focus their attention on various social media platforms
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 rather than dedicate their time to study.
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 leading to mediocre ( unacceptable, unsatisfactory, underperformance ) performance among these students.
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