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People these days watches tv films and other programms alone rather than others .Do hte advantages of this developments outweigh disasvantages.

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A trend which increase among people these days is to spend
time
 alone with movies and other
television
programms
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programmes
programs
inspite
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in spite
 of watching in
company
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 of others. In my point of view
demerits
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the demerits
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 of
this
developments
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development
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 outweigh its merits.
To begin
 with, even though there is
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room for personal
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choices
chocices
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choices
 and
preferences
 while watching alone
in contrast
 it may result in individualism.
This
 is why we may not be able to sense the
preferences
 of our family members and friends.
Although
this
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tendency
 may contribute
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 to
develop
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 different communication skills in future,
for
example
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to know
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 how to incorporate with others in different situations. Another thing to be considered is that
,
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 these days people are running short of
time
 and difficult to find
liesure
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leisure
time
 as well as family
time
. So whenever we get
time
 to watch a movie if we involve family members with us both ways it will be beneficial, we got relaxed and
interaced
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interacted
interact
 with family.
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, when parents sit with children to enjoy some
infornational
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informational
international
 program
in
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television
 with small discussions it will be helpful to improve their knowledge.
Finally
 being with others
give
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 us more energy and enthusiasm along with a feeling of love. Normally people turn on
television
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the television
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 when they are in need of a change.
In
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such
 occasions supportive presence of family and friends add more positivity. In another way sitting alone may increase our loneliness
further
 it will result in
negative
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a negative
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mindset
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mind set
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mindset
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. To sum
up
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 man is a social animal and always enriches in the company of fellow beings. Spending alone with
television
 despite
satify
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satisfy
 our personal
preferences
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preferences
, incapable of adding energy, joy and belongingness to our life.
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