The best way to solve world's environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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nowadays,The production of transport
vehicles
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are
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increasing very fast
in
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all over the world.In
this
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case
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if the production value increases
then
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the environmental problems
also
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increases
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equally.we can see the
air
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pollution due to the function of
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fuel-based
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fuel based
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vehicles
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like
car
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cars
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,
bus
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buses
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,
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and truck
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truck
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trucks
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.they are producing too much
of
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carbonated
air
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from their engines.it would be spoiling our environment continuously.transportation is the biggest need for
humans
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routine life.
one
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side factories are manufacturing lots of
vehicles
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daily on the other side humans are destroying forests which
makes
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pure oxygenated
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for living things
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earth.
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If we increase the cost of fuel for cars and other
vehicles
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there is no use.because today
peoples
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are earning lots of money in
this
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running modern world.so In my point of
view
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we need to get
a
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alternative way of transportation
vehicles
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.let
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think about electric
vehicles
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is
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not
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air
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pollution. electric
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are functioning from batteries.we can charge it through electricity.today we can
getting
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electricity easily from windmills,
nuclear
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and nuclear
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power plants.so we all need
change
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into
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electric
vehicles
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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