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The most important responsibility of higher education is to prepare students for their future jobs. Do you agree or disagree?

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The predominant liability of university
education
 is to make students capable of acquiring jobs.
However
, I don't believe the same.
This
 essay discusses the supporting arguments and explanations for disagreement.
To begin
 with,
initially
,
education
 is much more than just
educate
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 in
accounting
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an accounting
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a
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apply
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job.
In other words
, higher
education
, though helps in future jobs, but
it
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apply
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helps in getting aware of what is
real
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the real
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 world could be like and helps in gaining knowledge in a particular course they choose,
as a
result
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 adapt practically.
Moreover
, after completion of their
education
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 they step
in to
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into
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real
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the real
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 world,
therefore
, just knowledge about academics may not help them to survive.
Practical
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The practical
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 world is more about skills
such
 as team working, leadership and updating about current affairs, most importantly communication skills. Despite
of
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making aware
about
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 all these to the students, they never intimate in general. To conclude, I disagree with the statement. University
education
 has much more to teach, rather than just academics which may not help them in getting
the
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 job.
However
, it should teach to succeed in life.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • equips
  • theoretical knowledge
  • practical skills
  • fosters
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving
  • adaptability
  • narrow the scope
  • well-rounded individual
  • intellectual curiosity
  • instill
  • ethical values
  • social responsibility
  • rapidly changing job market
  • curricula
  • job-ready
  • lifelong learning
  • personal development
  • diverse career paths
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