You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about: -What course are you doing now -Why you are not satisfied with that course -what course would you like to change to

Dear
Mr.
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Patel , My name is
neha
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Neha
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and am
student
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in
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your college campus. I am
waiting
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this
letter to request your change my current
course
.
At presently
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,
i
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am studying Bachelor's computer applications and was start
this
course
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Last
month.
However
, I will go to Canada
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after two years. And I have
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enough time to finish
this
course
.
This
course
finished after three years . So can changes
this
course
.
Moreover
,
i
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am interesting
on
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nursing and is not
very
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long time
finish
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. So you can change
my
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in
nursing
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field. I know it's difficult
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change
this
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after two months but you
also
understand my situation. I am waiting for your positive response in
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. Yours Sincerely, Neha
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