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Some people think that young people are suitable for learning foreign languages. Some people think adults are more suitable. Discuss both and give your opinion.

#people #languages #adults
the precedence of the importance of foreign
language
 among
people
. which was always a hotly debatable topic has now become more controversial with many
people
 claiming that it is beneficial while others reject
this
 notion. the substantial influence of
this
 trend has sparked controversy over its potential impact in recent years. in my ,opinion
i
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 firmly agree teenagers are more interested
to
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learning
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foreign
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a foreign
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language
 in comparison to others.
this
 essay will elaborate
further
 on my views on the favouring of
positive
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 impact of
this
 trend and
thus
 will lead to a logical conclusion. analyzing the statement explaining
further
 the
first
 and foremost reason behind
this
 is that the youngster
learn
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foreign
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a foreign
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language
 for their bright future. For ,instance the global survey indicated that more the 60% of adults go
in
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 foreign countries for higher education. another striking benefit in
this
 regard
are
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 that students communicate in a
well
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 manner with foreigner and know about their culture and living sense. categorically discussing it cannot be ignored the main reason behind
this
 is that young
people
 are more energetic and they know how we improve themselves. probing ahead the main underlying reason stems from the fact that youngsters are more crazy and energetic and very sensitive about their bright future. they learn especially the
english
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language
 which is more famous across the globe. youngster learn
foreign
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language
 for good earning and make
good
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 lifestyle. apart from
this
 aforementioned
above
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 it can be clearly stated why many are favour of
this
 trend. to recapitulate according to the argument mentioned above one can reach
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the conclusion that the benefits
of
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mostly young
people
 like to learn while old
people
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 not much interested.
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