Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want.Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women.What is your opinion?

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It is commonly believed that many ranges of occupations can be done
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females and males whereas some individuals assert that oodles of jobs cannot be done aspect of gender circumstances.In my opinion,a variety of works might be suitable for not only
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but
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women
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because of two valid and eligible reasons .
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,one reason why
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and
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have equal
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skills is intellectual abilities .All gender types that are females and males have developed cognitive skills
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as communication,speaking and learning abilities,
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,all sex can do any types of
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what
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they want to do.
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contrast,it is one essential factor for
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's
occupaitons
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occupations
occupation
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an aspect
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of lots of things.To give a clear example, somebody can be a
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successful
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successful
engineer if
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person
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him/her
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department
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department
like electric-electronic,construction or computer majors.To
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illustrate
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that,
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people
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who want to have any kind of
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have to enhance themselves in order to obtain which one of the occupations they want to have whether they
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women
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or
men
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only
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indicator
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is intellectual sufficiency.
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,physical conditions cannot be
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factor for
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preferences
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.It is clear that many
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and
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are working
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challenging situations
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their working areas and they have to suffer from lots of negative consequences while they can endure and overcome both
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and
men
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.
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,construction engineers that are females and males overcome many problems when they are working
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as hot weather
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conditions
conditons
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conditions
or heavy weights these conditions cannot affect particular gender.
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,many successful engineers are both
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and
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any country ,like U.S,France and Italy.
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,having enough physical abilities is
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necessity
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circumstances . To summarize,when all of these factors are
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taken
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taken
into account thanks to the contemporary world,
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who
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develop
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develop
themselves and have sufficient physical skills can do all types of
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they want to accomplish.I believe that there are two obligations for
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's
job
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preferrences
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preferences
owing to these remarkable reasons.
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