Computers are being used more and more in education. Some say that thus is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is a fact that, nowadays, there is

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widespread use of technology,

such

as computers and the internet, in academic fields. A lot of

people

believe that

this

practice could be beneficial to students and teachers, because of effective and affordable learning as well as easy access to information.

However

, others have negative opinions as

this

method could arise numerous problems,

such

as eyesight issues and a lack of human interaction. With the help of the internet,

people

can learn whatever they want without going to school. All they need to do is to type a few words into the search engine,

such

as Google, and

then

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will appear on the screen.

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a class could be expensive in universities. There are numerous online learning portals, offering education at reasonable prices. It is,

therefore

, undeniable that technology makes knowledge cheaply and readily available.

However

, some

people

worry that looking at the computer screen for a long time can cause

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deterioration in vision. If the amount of screen time could be monitored and reduced, the visual impairment could have been prevented.

Moreover

, the public argues that online learning is lack

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communication among pupils and teachers.

Nevertheless

,

this

is not true because

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learning platforms,

such

as Zoom, students can still see and interact with each other, maintaining friendships. In conclusion,

although

the application of computers may have certain disadvantages, the benefits provided by

this

method outweigh them. Convenient learning system and attainable information

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the primary reasons why more and more

people

are becoming

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on technology.