You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • describe the training course you want to do • explain what the company could do to help you • say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inquire about training courses which will be useful for my job.
The information is about training courses. One day, I went online to social media, and I found the training
course
. I need to take the training course
as I want to improve my skills. The training course
about my job and it is in another country.
I need help from the company.Firstly
, I need to holiday for the training course
. To me , it lasts a month. Please, don't get it
wrong, but I want Correct pronoun usage
me
to
money from the company . For expenditures in the training Change preposition
apply
course
.
I need to tell you the additional information that it has more useful lessons other
courses for my job. I can say Change preposition
than other
this
course
is the best teaching in my tendency. I watched a few videos on their YouTube channel. That course
incredibly
helpful to our company. If you agree that I go to lessons , you will never deplore. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply!
Yours faithfully
AzizbekAdd a missing verb
is incredibly
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task achievement
Add more specific details about the training course, such as its name, duration, and primary learning objectives. This will help to fully address the task prompt.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical flow by clearly separating each main idea into distinct paragraphs, such as one paragraph for describing the course, one for explaining what the company could do to help, and one for detailing how the course will be useful for your job.
coherence cohesion
You have included a greeting and closing, which helps to structure your letter appropriately.
task achievement
Your intention to improve your skills and explaining the benefits of the course shows a good effort to justify your request.