Popular events like football world cup and other international sporting occassions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The
first
given chart shows the number of marriages and divorces in the USA between 1970  and 2000, while the
second
one illustrates the proportion of American adults' marital
status
in 1970 and 2000. While the
figure
for marriages decreased, the
figure
for divorces fluctuated in that period. It is clear that the proportion of the mature American marital
status
,
such
as never married, married, widowed, and divorced, changed clearly in 1970 and 2000. According to the
first
bar graph, the
figure
for marriages was the highest in 1970 and 1980, at 2,5
million
, and
then
it declined obviously to 2
million
in 2000. Whereas the
figure
for divorces was the lowest in 1970, at 1
million
, it peaked at nearly 1,5
million
, but
then
decreased again to 1
million
in 2000. Following the
second
graph, the proportion of married
status
was the greatest percentage in comparison with other statuses, at 70% in 1970, and
then
it decreased to 60% in 2000. The
figure
for never married
status
increased from around 15% to 20% between 1970 and 2000, while the
figure
for divorced increased from 1% to 10%. The
figure
for widowed decreased from 8% to 7% in that period.
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  • foster global unity
  • diplomatic tools
  • friendly competition
  • national pride
  • peaceful context
  • media coverage
  • international image
  • stimulate economic growth
  • exacerbate tensions
  • nationalist sentiments
  • politicization of sports
  • doping
  • corruption
  • exploitation
  • public discontent
  • infrastructure development
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