The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
The pie charts illustrate the three types of the same.
use
of water
in North America
, South America
, Europe, Africa, Central Asia
and Southeast Asia
. Generally, the majority of water
is useduse
for agricultural purposes, Correct your spelling
used
whereas
the domestic usage of water
is very less in four different areas and industrial use
in two areas. In North America
and Europe, the industrial use
of water
is the highest by
48% and 53%, respectively, Change preposition
at
,
Change the punctuation
apply
however
the domestic use
of water
is the lowest in both areas. On the other hand
in South America
, the majority of water
usage is for Agricultural use
and the lesser use
is by Industries. In Africa, Central Asia
and South East Asia
, the major use
of water
is for agricultural purposes by 84%, 88% and 81%, respectively, whereas
in Africa the industrial use
of water
is decline
CORRECT YOUR SPELLING declined The word decline doesn’t seem to fit Change the verb form
is declining
this
context. Consider replacing it with a different one. show examples by 7%. Domestic use
of water
in Central Asia
and South East Asia
remain
CHANGE THE VERB FORM remains The verb Correct subject-verb agreement
remains
remain
does not seem to agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form. show examplesChange the verb form
remains
Change preposition
of
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