The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
The pie charts illustrate the three types of the same.
use
of Use synonyms
water
in North Use synonyms
America
, South Use synonyms
America
, Europe, Africa, Central Use synonyms
Asia
and Southeast Use synonyms
Asia
. Generally, the majority of Use synonyms
water
is Use synonyms
useduse
for agricultural purposes, Correct your spelling
used
whereas
the domestic usage of Linking Words
water
is very less in four different areas and industrial Use synonyms
use
in two areas. In North Use synonyms
America
and Europe, the industrial Use synonyms
use
of Use synonyms
water
is the highest Use synonyms
by
48% and 53%, respectively, Change preposition
at
,
Change the punctuation
apply
however
the domestic Linking Words
use
of Use synonyms
water
is the lowest in both areas. Use synonyms
On the other hand
in South Linking Words
America
, the majority of Use synonyms
water
usage is for Agricultural Use synonyms
use
and the lesser Use synonyms
use
is by Industries. In Africa, Central Use synonyms
Asia
and South East Use synonyms
Asia
, the major Use synonyms
use
of Use synonyms
water
is for agricultural purposes by 84%, 88% and 81%, respectively, Use synonyms
whereas
in Africa the industrial Linking Words
use
of Use synonyms
water
Use synonyms
is decline
CORRECT YOUR SPELLING declined The word decline doesn’t seem to fit Change the verb form
is declining
this
context. Consider replacing it with a different one. show examples by 7%. Domestic Linking Words
use
of Use synonyms
water
in Central Use synonyms
Asia
and South East Use synonyms
Asia
Use synonyms
remain
CHANGE THE VERB FORM remains The verb Correct subject-verb agreement
remains
remain
does not seem to agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form. show examplesChange the verb form
remains
Change preposition
of
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